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こんにちは、オクトパスです。

この記事は前の記事で紹介したライティングの学習方法のおまけみたいな感じの記事です。
メインはこっちなのでライティングの学習の仕方を知りたい方はまずこちらへ

英検準1級対策(独学) ライティング編どうも、どうもオクトパスです。 この記事では英検準1級合格するまで独学でやってきたライティング対策について紹介していきます。 ラ...

以下は僕が英検準1級一次試験受験2回目までメモ書きとして残しておいたライティング集です。
本音を言うと消すのもったいないからそのまま記事にしちゃえ!みたいなノリです(笑)

前のライティング学習の方法の記事を読んで僕が実際どのように練習してきたのか伝われば幸いです。
めちゃめちゃあるので本当に参考程度でいいと思いますw
下のほうへ行くほど内容もよくなってきていると思いますが、初めのほうの拙い文もこんな感じだったんと参考になるかもしれません( ゚Д゚)

この記事がライティングの練習にお役に立てれば幸いです。

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Q: Do you think that online course are as effective as traditional classes?

自分の答え↓

A: In my opinion, online courses are as effective as traditional classes because we receive a lot of good things.
First online courses are more flexible than traditional classes. If you have an internet environment, you can take class anytime. and also it means to save time because today many people are very busy. so whenever taking classes are good things.
Second, we can connect with people all over the world. For example learning English, we can choose an English teacher who is suitable for you and you can communicate with them. so you will be able to enjoy learning.
In conclusion, taking online courses are very effective in our life.

添削して返ってきた返事↓

A: I believe online courses are just as effective as traditional classes. The main reasons are the flexibility and the ability to connect with people from various countries.
  Firstly, they offer greater flexibility. With an internet connection, you can take classes at any time, saving time for busy people.
  Secondly, online courses allow you to connect with people from all over the world, which is particularly helpful for language learning. For example, you can choose a suitable English teacher and communicate with them from anywhere, improving your language skills while enjoying the experience.
  In conclusion, taking online courses is a highly effective way to learn, providing flexibility and opportunities to connect with people globally.
Reasons for corrections:
The original text had some grammar and punctuation errors, which I corrected to improve clarity and readability. Some sentences were rephrased to better convey the intended message and make the text more concise. I also adjusted some expressions to make them more appropriate and understandable for a TOEIC score of 575.

A:私はオンラインコースが従来の授業と同じくらい効果的だと信じています。主な理由は柔軟性と様々な国々の人々と繋がることができることです。 まず、オンラインコースは大きな柔軟性を提供しています。インターネットに接続することで、忙しい人々にとって時間を節約しながらいつでもクラスを受講することができます。 次に、オンラインコースによって、世界中の人々と繋がることができます。特に言語学習にとっては非常に有益です。例えば、適切な英語教師を選び、どこからでもコミュニケーションを取ることができ、楽しみながら言語スキルを向上させることができます。 結論として、オンラインコースは柔軟性とグローバルな人々と繋がる機会を提供することで、学ぶための非常に効果的な方法です。

訳文の理由: 元のテキストには、文法や句読点のエラーがあったため、明確さと読みやすさを向上させるために修正しました。いくつかの文は、意図されたメッセージをよりよく伝え、テキストをより簡潔にするために言い換えました。また、TOEICスコア575に適した表現に変更することで、より理解しやすくしました。

追加文

主な理由は融通が利くことと様々様々な国の人と交流ができることです。 以上の文を英語に訳して
The main reasons are the flexibility and the ability to connect with people from
various countries.
Q: Do you think that fewer Japanese students are interested in other countries these days?
自分の解答↓
A: It is not true that fewer Japanese students are interested in other countries these days because it is getting international in the world.
Firstly, you can get many information about foreign countries on the internet. For example if you want to visit sightseeing spot, you can get information quickly what you want. also students are interested foreign culture. they can learn a lot of things on the internet.
Secondly, they know that speaking foreign languages are very useful to get highly job and can earn more money than in Japan. So they want to learn about foreign languages, also to learn foreign language is great experience for Japanese students.
For the reasons mentioned above, I think that many Japanese students are interested in other countries.
添削して返ってきた答え↓
“Contrary to popular belief, many Japanese students are still interested in other countries. This is due to the easy access to information about foreign countries provided by the internet. For instance, if you want to visit a tourist attraction, you can quickly find the information you need online.
Additionally, students are interested in foreign cultures and can learn a great deal about them on the internet. Secondly, they are aware that speaking foreign languages is highly beneficial for securing good jobs and earning higher salaries than in Japan.
As a result, learning a foreign language is a great experience for Japanese students. Therefore, I believe that many Japanese students still have a keen interest in other countries.”
「一般的に信じられているのとは異なり、多くの日本人学生は他国に興味を持ち続けています。これは、インターネットによって提供される外国に関する情報への簡単なアクセスのおかげです。たとえば、観光スポットを訪れたい場合、必要な情報をすぐにオンラインで見つけることができます。さらに、学生たちは外国文化に興味があり、それらについて多くをインターネットで学ぶことができます。第二に、彼らは外国語を話すことが、日本でのより高い給与を得るために非常に有用であることを知っています。したがって、外国語を学ぶことは、日本の学生にとって素晴らしい経験です。そのため、私は多くの日本人学生が他国に興味を持ち続けていると考えています。」
①Q: Do you think it’s better for children to grow up in big cities?
自分の答え↓
A: It is better for children to grow up in big cities. because it is good opportunities to learn many things and they can communicate with a large of number people.
 firstly, in big cities, there are many opportunities to learn things. For example there are a large of number facilities such as zoo, aquarium and museum. Children can learn many things there.
  Secondly, the big city has various people such as from abroad, from other city. so children can know variety of cultures, lifestyles and so on. It is important for children to get to know people from other places when they are still very young so that they will be able to survive in today’s global society.
  In conclusion, I think big cities are a great place for kids to grow up.
今度は単純に「文法を直して」と入力↓
“  It is better for children to grow up in big cities because there are good opportunities to learn many things and they can communicate with a large number of people.
  Firstly, big cities offer many opportunities for children to learn. For example, there are facilities such as zoos, aquariums, and museums where children can gain knowledge.
  Secondly, big cities have a diverse population, including people from other countries and cities, allowing children to learn about different cultures and lifestyles. It is crucial for children to meet people from diverse backgrounds when they are young so that they can succeed in today’s global society.
  In conclusion, I believe that big cities are an excellent place for children to grow up.”
「子供たちが大都市で育つことは良いことです。そこでは多くのことを学ぶ機会があり、多くの人々とコミュニケーションをとることができます。まず、大都市には多くの学びの機会があります。例えば、動物園、水族館、博物館などがあり、子供たちはそこで多くのことを学ぶことができます。次に、大都市には異なる国や都市出身の人々など、多様な人々がいます。そのため、子供たちは異なる文化やライフスタイルを学ぶことができます。今日のグローバルな社会で生き抜くために、子供たちは若いうちから多様な背景を持つ人々に出会うことが重要です。結論として、私は大都市が子供たちが成長するには素晴らしい場所だと考えています。」
②Q: Do you think that young children should have their own phone?
自分の答え↓
A: In my opinion, young children should have their cell phone, because having cell phone has great benefit for children.
Firstly, thanks to developing technology, having cell phone to children, parents can always check their child by GPS. For example many parents have anxious about their child who go to school when they are very young. but if they check the locate anytime, they feel relive.
  Secondly, today, there are a large number of apps. They are very useful to children who are interested in learning things. For example, it is said that learning English is good when very young age. If children are interested in English learning apps, they will study themselves.
  In conclusion, I think that young children should have their own cell phone.
「文法を直して」と入力↓

“In my opinion, young children should have their own cell phones because they offer great benefits. Firstly, thanks to developing technology, parents can always check their children’s location using GPS. For example, many parents are anxious about their young children going to school alone, but if they can check their child’s location at any time, they will feel relieved.

Secondly, there are a large number of apps available today that are very useful for children who are interested in learning. For instance, it is said that it is good to learn English at a young age. If children are interested in learning English through apps, they will be able to study on their own.

In conclusion, I believe that young children should have their own cell phones.”

「私の意見では、若い子供たちは自分自身の携帯電話を持つべきです。なぜなら、携帯電話を持つことには子供たちにとって大きな利益があるからです。まず第一に、発展する技術のおかげで、親は常にGPSを使って子供たちの場所を確認することができます。例えば、多くの親が幼い子供を一人で学校に行かせることに不安を感じますが、いつでも子供の場所を確認できれば安心できます。

第二に、今日は非常に多くのアプリがあり、学びたいと思っている子供たちにとって非常に有用です。例えば、若い時に英語を学ぶのが良いとされています。子供たちが英語学習アプリに興味を持っている場合、自分自身で勉強することができます。

結論として、私は若い子供たちは自分自身の携帯電話を持つべきだと考えています。」

 

③Q: Agree or disagree: The use of cell phone on public transportation should be banned.

自分の答え↓

A: I agree this opinion. The use of cell phone on public transportation should be banned. Recent year, cell phones are increasing in society and very useful for our lives. On the other hand, problems also are increasing.
Firstly, these days, accidents are increasing while walk using cell phones. If you walk using cell phones in the station, you might drop to the railroad or bump to someone. It is very dangerous and then you may be injured.
Secondly, regarding to manners, it is not good. For example, talking others or listening to music  with cell phone in many people in train, it may be annoyance to many people. also you intense watch your phone’s screen, you cannot offer your seat for elderly people.
In conclusion,  The use of cell phone on public transportation is not beneficial.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

I agree with this opinion. The use of cell phones on public transportation should be banned. In recent years, cell phones have become increasingly prevalent in society and have proven to be very useful in our daily lives. However, along with their benefits, problems have also arisen.

Firstly, accidents have been on the rise as a result of people using cell phones while walking. If you use your cell phone while walking in a station, you may drop it onto the railroad tracks or bump into someone, posing a serious danger and risk of injury.

Secondly, the use of cell phones on public transportation can also be considered impolite or lacking in manners. For example, talking loudly on the phone or listening to music without using headphones can be annoying to other passengers on a train. Additionally, if you are intently staring at your phone’s screen, you may not be able to offer your seat to elderly or pregnant passengers in need.

In conclusion, the use of cell phones on public transportation is not beneficial and should be banned to ensure safety and consideration for others.

私はこの意見に同意します。公共の交通機関での携帯電話の使用は禁止されるべきです。近年、携帯電話は社会でますます一般的になり、日常生活で非常に便利に使われています。しかし、その利点と共に、問題も発生しています。

第一に、携帯電話を使いながら歩くことによる事故が増加しています。駅で携帯電話を使いながら歩くと、鉄道の線路に落としたり、誰かにぶつかったりする可能性があり、重大な危険性と怪我のリスクをもたらします。

第二に、公共の交通機関での携帯電話の使用は、不作法とされることもあります。例えば、電話で大声で話したり、ヘッドフォンを使わずに音楽を聴いたりすると、他の乗客にとって迷惑になることがあります。また、携帯電話の画面を一心に見ていると、高齢者や妊婦の席を譲ることができないかもしれません。

結論として、公共の交通機関での携帯電話の使用は利益をもたらさず、安全性と他者への配慮を確保するために禁止されるべきです。

Q:④ Do you think that buying a home is better than renting one?

自分の答え↓

A: In my opinion, I think that buying a home is better than renting one. Having a home is great beneficial for us.
To begin with, buying a home means is investment to real estate. This is good way to use money. However, renting apartment is just expense money. It is waste of money.
Another reason that you can remodel your house easily. It is very enjoyable to imagine, decorate, painting, making space and so on. But renting apartment is difficult to remodel because it has to return room which is cleaned up completely someday.
In conclusion, I think that buying a home is a good way for your well-being and financial prosperity.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

In my opinion, I think that buying a home is better than renting one, as having a home provides great benefits for us.

To begin with, buying a home is an investment in real estate, which is a good way to use money. Renting an apartment, on the other hand, is just an expense and a waste of money.

Another reason to buy a home is that you can easily remodel it. It is very enjoyable to imagine, decorate, paint, create space, and so on. However, renting an apartment makes it difficult to remodel because eventually, you have to return the room in a completely cleaned-up state.

In conclusion, I believe that buying a home is a good way to improve your well-being and achieve financial prosperity.

私の意見では、家を買うことは家賃を払うことよりも優れていると思います。自宅を持つことは私たちにとって非常に大きな利益をもたらします。

まず、家を買うことは不動産への投資になります。これはお金を使う良い方法です。しかし、アパートを借りることはただの出費で、お金を無駄にすることになります。

また、家を簡単にリフォームできることも理由の一つです。想像すること、装飾やペイント、スペース作りなどは非常に楽しいことです。しかし、アパートを借りていると、完全に掃除された状態に部屋を返さなければならないため、リフォームが難しいです。

結論として、家を買うことは健康と財政的な繁栄のための良い方法だと思います。

 

⑤Q: Do you think that Japanese companies should require their employees to use English in the workplace?

自分の答え↓

A: In my opinion, I think that Japanese companies should require their employees to use English in the workplace because it is necessary to grow Japanese companies.
To begin with, English is a global language, so that to be able to English is great benefit. For example, company can bargain to various foreign countries. This means, it makes many business chances and earn more money.
In addition, Japanese companies want to hire great person from foreign country, it would hire foreigner if company has person who can use English. but company has not this person, it will miss the chance to hire great person.
In conclusion, I believe Japanese companies should require their employees to use English in the workplace.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

In my opinion, Japanese companies should require their employees to use English in the workplace because it is necessary for the growth of Japanese companies.

To begin with, English is a global language, and being able to use English is a great benefit. For example, a company can negotiate with various foreign countries, creating many business opportunities and increasing profits.

In addition, if a Japanese company wants to hire great talent from foreign countries, having employees who can use English would make it easier to hire a foreigner. However, if the company does not have anyone who can use English, it will miss the chance to hire great talent.

In conclusion, I believe that Japanese companies should require their employees to use English in the workplace.

私の意見では、日本企業は成長するために従業員に英語を職場で使用することを求めるべきだと思います。

まず、英語はグローバルな言語であり、英語を使えることは大きな利点です。例えば、企業は様々な外国と交渉することができ、多くのビジネスチャンスが生まれ、利益を増やすことができます。

また、日本企業が外国から優秀な人材を採用したい場合、英語を使える従業員がいると外国人を採用することがより容易になります。しかし、英語を使える従業員がいない場合、優秀な人材を採用するチャンスを逃すことになります。

結論として、私は日本企業が従業員に英語を職場で使用することを求めるべきだと考えています。

 

⑥Q: Do you think that online grocery shopping will become more popular?

自分の答え↓

A: In my opinion, online grocery shopping will become more popular because it is very useful for elderly people and physical disables.
To begin with, the benefit of buying online is to send your house what you bought something. so it is very useful for people who cannot go out due to physical disable or older and so on. If they can buy on the internet, they cannot be anxious to out of stock food.
In addition, you can easily choose what you want something by online shopping. For example, if you want to buy meat, you just search this one in that site. It is not need to spend time. so lead to save the time.
In conclusion, I believe that online grocery shopping will become more popular in the future.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

In my opinion, online grocery shopping will become more popular because it is very useful for elderly people and those with physical disabilities.

To begin with, the benefit of buying online is having your purchases delivered to your house. This is particularly useful for people who cannot go out due to physical disabilities or age-related limitations. If they can buy groceries online, they don’t have to worry about running out of food.

In addition, online shopping makes it easy to find the specific products you want. For example, if you want to buy meat, you can simply search for it on the website instead of spending time searching through the store. This saves time and effort.

In conclusion, I believe that online grocery shopping will become increasingly popular in the future.

私の意見では、オンラインスーパーは高齢者や身体障害者にとって非常に役立つため、今後ますます普及すると思います。

まず、オンラインでの買い物の利点の一つは、購入したものが自宅に届くことです。これは身体障害者や年齢による制限がある人にとって特に便利です。オンラインで食料品を購入することができれば、食料品が品切れになる心配をする必要がありません。

さらに、オンラインショッピングでは、自分が欲しい製品を簡単に見つけることができます。例えば、肉を買いたい場合、ウェブサイトで検索するだけで、店内を探す手間が省けます。これにより、時間を大幅に節約することができます。

結論として、私はオンラインスーパーが将来的にますます普及すると考えています。

 

Q:⑦ Agree or disagree: Young people should live with roommates after they move out of their parent’s homes.

自分の答え↓

A: I agree that Young people should live with roommates after they move out of their parent’s homes because it is great benefit about costs and life experience.
To begin with. living which move out of parent’s homes is very expensive for young people, such as rental apartment, food, groceries and so on. However, if they live with roommates, they save them.
In addition, it is good experience to learn sociability and cooperativeness. It is important for young people to experience living with other people. Also they can enjoyable with roommates, such as watching movie, cooking, eating. These experiences give young people life enrichment.
In conclusion, I believe that Young people should live with roommates after they move out of their parent’s homes.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

I agree that young people should live with roommates after moving out of their parents’ homes because it provides great benefits in terms of cost and life experience.

To begin with, living independently after leaving one’s parents’ home can be very expensive for young people. Rent, food, groceries, and other expenses can quickly add up. However, living with roommates can help them save money.

In addition, living with roommates is a valuable experience for learning social skills and cooperation. It is important for young people to learn how to live with others, and they can enjoy spending time with their roommates by watching movies, cooking, and eating together. These experiences can enrich young people’s lives.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that young people should consider living with roommates after moving out of their parents’ homes.

私は、若い人たちは親の家を出てからルームメイトと一緒に暮らすべきだと考えます。その理由は、費用の面での利点や人生経験において大きな恩恵があるからです。

まず、親の家を出て独立することは若い人たちにとって非常に高価なものです。家賃や食費、食料品などの費用がすぐに積み上がっていくことがあります。しかし、ルームメイトと一緒に住むことで、費用を節約できます。

さらに、ルームメイトと一緒に住むことは、社交的なスキルや協調性を学ぶための貴重な経験です。他の人と一緒に生活することを学ぶことは若い人たちにとって重要であり、ルームメイトと一緒に映画を見たり、料理をしたり、食事をしたりすることで楽しい時間を過ごすことができます。これらの経験は、若い人たちの人生を豊かにします。

結論として、私は若い人たちは親の家を出てからルームメイトと一緒に生活することを強くお勧めします。

 

Q:⑧Agree or dis agree: Japanese people tend to work even after they retire.

自分の答え↓

A:People who work after retirement is good for their health and feel motivate. Therefore they tend to work even after they retire.
To begin with after retirement if Japanese people do not work, their health will be weak and suffer sick easily if they do not exercise regularly. Also not only body health but mental health is good because they connect some communities that there are good relationships.
Another reason, some people need to work for personal finances reason. Recent years, commodity price is increasing. Many people cannot live only their pension. So that companies should provide more working places environment even after they retire.
In conclusion, I agree that Japanese people tend to work even after they retire.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

People who work after retirement tend to have better health and feel more motivated, which is why many choose to continue working even after they retire.

To begin with, if Japanese people do not work after retirement, they may experience weaker physical health and be more susceptible to illness if they do not exercise regularly. Additionally, continuing to work can improve their mental health by allowing them to connect with communities and maintain good relationships.

Another reason why some Japanese people choose to work after retirement is for financial reasons. In recent years, the cost of living has been increasing, and many people cannot rely solely on their pension to support themselves. Therefore, it is important for companies to provide opportunities for seniors to continue working in a comfortable and supportive environment.

In conclusion, I agree that Japanese people often choose to work after retirement, as it can have significant benefits for both their physical and mental well-being, as well as their financial stability.

「退職後も働く人は健康に良く、やる気も出るため、多くの人が退職後も働き続けることを選択します。

まず、日本人が退職後に働かない場合、定期的に運動しないと身体的に健康状態が低下し、病気にかかりやすくなる可能性があります。さらに、仕事を続けることで、地域社会に参加し良好な関係を維持することができるため、精神的な健康状態も良好になります。

もう一つの理由として、個人的な財政的理由が挙げられます。近年、物価が上昇しているため、多くの人が年金だけでは生活できなくなっています。そのため、企業が快適で支援的な環境でシニアの方々が働き続ける機会を提供することが重要です。

結論として、日本人は退職後も働き続けることが多く、身体的・精神的な健康状態や財政的な安定に大きなメリットがあるため、賛成です。」

「この文をなるべく簡単な言い回しにして。英語で。」↓

Retirees who work tend to be healthier and more motivated, which is why many Japanese people choose to keep working. Not working can lead to weaker physical health and less social interaction, which can negatively impact mental health. Financial reasons also play a role, as many retirees cannot rely solely on their pensions. Therefore, it’s important for companies to offer comfortable and supportive work environments for seniors. Overall, working after retirement has numerous benefits for physical and mental well-being, as well as financial stability.

退職者が働くと、健康状態が良くなり、やる気も出るため、多くの日本人が働き続けることを選択しています。働かないと、身体的な健康が弱まり、社会的な交流が減少するため、精神的な健康に悪影響を与える可能性があります。また、金銭的な理由もあり、年金だけでは生活できない退職者が多くいます。そのため、シニア向けの快適で支援的な職場環境を提供することが重要です。退職後も働くことは、身体的、精神的な健康に加え、金銭的な安定にも多くのメリットがあるため、大変重要です。

Q:⑨Agree or disagree: The number of families in which both parents work will continue to increase
自分の答え↓
A: The number of families in which both parents work will continue to increase because it takes costs in term of living cost and childcare costs.
To begin with, both parents work provides great benefits. They can earn more money with both parents work and then make for safety. If only one person work for living, it cannot make income if working person is sickness or injury. But it is safety both parents work.
In addition, in recent years, the cost of living has been increasing, so parents need more money for living, and also if they have a child, they need to work for education, cloth, food and so on.
For these reasons, the number of families in which both parents work will continue to increase.
「文法を直して」と入力↓

The number of families in which both parents work is expected to continue to increase due to the rising costs of living and childcare.

To begin with, having both parents work provides great benefits. They can earn more money together and create a sense of financial security. If only one parent works, the family may face financial difficulties if that person becomes sick or injured. However, if both parents work, they can mitigate such risks.

Additionally, in recent years, the cost of living has been increasing, and parents need more money to cover expenses such as education, clothing, and food for their children.

For these reasons, it is likely that more families will choose to have both parents work in the future.

両親が共に働く家庭の数は、生活費や子育て費用がかかるため、今後も増加するでしょう。

まず、両親が共に働くことは多くの利点があります。二人で働けば、より多くのお金を稼ぎ、安定した生活を築くことができます。一方で、片方のみが働いている場合、その人が病気や怪我をした場合には、収入が途絶える可能性があります。しかし、両親が共に働いていれば、そのようなリスクを回避できます。

さらに、近年では生活費が上昇しており、子供の教育費や衣服代、食費などを賄うためにはより多くのお金が必要になっています。

これらの理由から、将来的には両親が共に働く家庭が増えることが予想されます。

Q:⑩ Do you think that more companies will allow employees to work from home in the future?

自分の答え↓

A: Thanks to better technology, it is easily to work from home. Remote working provide great benefits. So more companies will allow employees to work from home.
To begin with, developing technology, people can be able to work anywhere. Employees work place where they prefer workplace, it can lead to generate creative, that is benefit for companies. There is no problem if employees have to do their quota.
Another reason, if employees have their very young children, it is not necessary to stop working for their children growing. previously, it is necessary to stop working, but if they can work from home, they do not worry about their children also they can make money while growing child. it is safety for employees.
In conclusion, more companies which allow employees to work from home increase in the future.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

Thanks to better technology, it is easier to work from home, and remote working provides great benefits. Therefore, more companies will allow their employees to work from home.

To begin with, due to advances in technology, people can work from anywhere. This allows employees to work from their preferred location, which can lead to increased creativity, benefitting the companies they work for. As long as employees meet their quotas, there is no issue.

Another reason is that if employees have very young children, they no longer need to stop working to care for them. In the past, it was necessary for them to take time off work, but now, with the option to work from home, they can earn money while caring for their growing children.

In conclusion, more companies are likely to allow their employees to work from home in the future.

より良い技術のおかげで、在宅勤務が簡単になり、リモートワークは大きなメリットを提供します。そのため、将来的にはより多くの企業が従業員に在宅勤務を認めるようになるでしょう。

まず第一に、技術の発展により、人々はどこからでも仕事ができるようになりました。従業員は自分の好きな場所で仕事ができるため、クリエイティビティが増し、それが企業にとってもメリットになります。従業員が定められた業務をこなせている限り、問題はありません。

もう一つの理由としては、従業員が幼い子供を抱えている場合、子供の成長に伴って仕事をやめる必要がなくなります。以前は、仕事を休まなければならなかったのですが、在宅勤務の選択肢がある今、成長する子供の世話をしながらお金を稼ぐことができます。

結論として、将来的にはより多くの企業が従業員に在宅勤務を認めるようになるでしょう。

 

Q:⑪ Agree or dis agree: More and more young Japanese people will do traditional  Japanese arts like tea ceremony and flower arrangement in the near future.

自分の答え↓

A: I disagree that more and more young Japanese people will do traditional  Japanese arts in the near future because these days, there are various fascinated things, so many young Japanese people are not interested it.
To begin with, in recent years, due to advance in technology, a lot of things are very useful and then entertainments are increasing. For example, video games, watching movies with smartphones. they are deeply occupied to them. So they do not have time to enjoy traditional Japanese arts.
In addition, young Japanese people are very busy. They do not afford to do traditional Japanese arts due to school activity, their study, interaction with their friends and so on. these are more important than traditional Japanese arts for young Japanese people.
In conclusion, Japanese people will not do traditional  Japanese arts in the near future.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

I disagree that more and more young Japanese people will engage in traditional Japanese arts in the near future. Nowadays, there are various fascinating things, and many young Japanese people are not interested in them.
To begin with, in recent years, due to advances in technology, there are many useful things and entertainment options that are increasing. For example, video games and watching movies on smartphones have deeply captured their attention. As a result, they do not have time to enjoy traditional Japanese arts.    Furthermore, young Japanese people are very busy with their school activities, studies, and social interactions with friends. They cannot afford to spend time on traditional Japanese arts as these other activities are more important to them.
In conclusion, I do not believe that Japanese people will increasingly participate in traditional Japanese arts in the near future.

私は、将来近い内に、ますます多くの若い日本人が伝統的な日本の芸術に関与するという意見には反対です。現在では、様々な魅力的なものがあり、多くの若い日本人はそれらに興味がありません。

まず、近年の技術の進歩により、役に立つものやエンターテインメントの選択肢が増えています。例えば、ビデオゲームやスマートフォンで映画を見ることが彼らの関心を深く占めています。そのため、彼らは伝統的な日本の芸術を楽しむ時間がありません。

さらに、若い日本人は学校の活動、勉強、友達との交流などで非常に忙しいです。これらの活動は彼らにとってより重要であるため、伝統的な日本の芸術に時間を割くことはできません。

結論として、私は日本人が将来伝統的な日本の芸術にますます関わることはないと考えています。

 

2021年度第1回
Q Agree or disagree: Big companies have a positive effect on society

自分の答え↓

A:I agree that big companies have a positive effect on society because there are many employees in big companies, so this allows employees to generate good ideas and contributes to society.
To begin with, big companies can hire more many people than small companies. So it can make useful products and services for society, because there are many ideas. As a results, it can lead to grow the economy.
Another reason is that big companies better think about environmental problem than small companies. For example, big construction companies think that it is important for them to recycle, reuse. They try to reduce industrial waste. These things contribute to society.
In conclusion, I believe that big companies have a positive effect on society.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

I agree that big companies have a positive effect on society because they employ a large number of people, which can lead to the generation of innovative ideas and contribute to the betterment of society.

To begin with, big companies can hire many more people than small companies, allowing for the development of useful products and services due to the greater number of ideas generated. This, in turn, can contribute to the growth of the economy.

Another reason is that big companies are often more environmentally conscious than small companies. For example, big construction companies prioritize recycling and reducing industrial waste. These actions have a positive impact on society and the environment.

In conclusion, I believe that big companies have a positive impact on society.

私は、大企業は多くの人々を雇用することができるため、革新的なアイデアを生み出し、社会の向上に貢献できるため、社会に対して肯定的な影響を持つと考えています。

まず、大企業は小企業よりも多くの人々を雇用できるため、多くのアイデアが生まれることで有用な製品やサービスの開発につながり、それが結果的に経済成長に寄与することができます。

また、大企業はしばしば小企業よりも環境意識が高い傾向があります。例えば、大規模建設会社はリサイクルや産業廃棄物の削減を優先して考えます。これらの行動は社会と環境に肯定的な影響を与えます。

結論として、私は大企業が社会に対して肯定的な影響を持つと考えています。

 

2021年度第2回
Q: Is it beneficial for workers to change jobs often?

自分の答え↓

A: I think that it is beneficial for workers to change jobs often because experience various work is useful.
To begin with, if you want to have own business, it is important to experience on various jobs, not only one job. This experience, you can acquire many skills and run own company. Also you can get connection with co-worker and it will help you.
In addition, you can keep motivation to change job. If you work at only one company long time, you may be reluctant to work because getting bored, nut new workplace gives you feeling fresh at environment of workplace. As a result, it can lead to increased your motivation.
In conclusion, I believe that changing jobs is beneficial for workers.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

I think that it is beneficial for workers to change jobs often because experiencing various work is useful.
To begin with, if you want to have your own business, it is important to gain experience in various jobs, not just one. Through this experience, you can acquire many skills and run your own company.
Additionally, you can build connections with co-workers, which can be helpful. Moreover, changing jobs can help maintain motivation. If you work at the same company for a long time, you may become reluctant to work due to boredom, but a new workplace can provide a fresh environment and help increase your motivation.
In conclusion, I believe that changing jobs is beneficial for workers.

「私は、様々な仕事を経験することが有益であるため、労働者が頻繁に転職することが望ましいと考えています。
まず、自分自身でビジネスを始めたい場合、一つの職種だけでなく、様々な職種で経験を積むことが重要です。この経験を通じて、多くのスキルを身につけ、自分自身の会社を運営することができます。
また、同僚との繋がりを築くこともでき、これが役立つことがあります。さらに、転職することでモチベーションを維持することができます。同じ会社で長期間働くと、退屈になって仕事をするのが嫌になるかもしれませんが、新しい職場は新鮮な環境を提供し、モチベーションを高めることができます。
結論として、私は、労働者が転職することは有益だと考えています。

Q: ⑫Agree or disagree: More Japanese people will move to the countryside after they retire in the future.

自分の答え↓

A: I disagree that More Japanese people will move to the countryside after they retire in the future for two reasons.
To begin with, moving to the countryside means leaving family and friends. It can lead to feel loneliness and stress because not used to live in environment. If elderly people have sick or injured, family or friends can help them, if they are near by elderly people.
Another reason is that, urban area tend to have higher quality healthcare than countryside. It is important for elderly people to take better healthcare, so they choose to live in urban area.
In conclusion, I do not believe that more Japanese people will choose to live in the countryside in the future.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

I disagree that more Japanese people will move to the countryside after they retire in the future for two reasons.

To begin with, moving to the countryside means leaving family and friends. It can lead to feelings of loneliness and stress because they are not used to living in that environment. If elderly people become sick or injured, having family or friends nearby can help them.

Another reason is that urban areas tend to have higher quality healthcare than the countryside. It is important for elderly people to have access to better healthcare, so they choose to live in urban areas.

In conclusion, I do not believe that more Japanese people will choose to live in the countryside in the future.

私は、将来、もっと多くの日本人が退職後に田舎に移住するとは考えていません。理由は2つあります。

まず、田舎に移ることは家族や友人と離れることを意味します。環境に慣れていないため、孤独感やストレスを感じる可能性があります。高齢者が病気やけがをした場合、家族や友人が近くにいれば、役に立ちます。

もう1つの理由は、都市部の方が田舎よりも医療が質が高いことです。高齢者がより良い医療を受けることが重要なので、都市部に住むことを選ぶのです。

結論として、私は将来、もっと多くの日本人が田舎に住むことを選ばないと考えています。

 

2020年度第1回
Q: Is it a good idea for local governments to build tourist sites, such as theme parks and museums?

自分の答え↓

A: I think that it is good idea for local governments to build tourist sites because it can provide great benefiting to local people and local areas for two reasons.
To begin with, building tourist sites can improve local economy. If many tourists visit there, they would spend money to buy souvenirs and to eat something at restaurant, it is benefiting for local people because they can earn more money.
In addition, building tourist sites can lead to employ for local people because increasing jobs, it needs to more workforce, and then people who live in local area will increase, as a results, it is beneficial effect to local people.
In conclusion, I believe that it is good idea for local governments to build tourist sites.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

I think it is a good idea for local governments to build tourist sites because it can provide great benefits to local people and areas for two reasons.

To begin with, building tourist sites can improve the local economy. If many tourists visit, they would spend money on souvenirs and eating at restaurants, which would benefit local people because they can earn more money.

In addition, building tourist sites can create job opportunities for local people, as it requires more workforce to manage the site. This could lead to an increase in the local population, resulting in further benefits for the area.

In conclusion, I believe that building tourist sites by local governments is a good idea.

地方自治体が観光地を建設することは、地元の人々や地域にとって2つの理由で大きな利益をもたらすと私は考えています。

まず、観光地を建設することで、地元経済が改善されます。多くの観光客が訪れる場合、土産物やレストランで食事をするためにお金を使います。これにより、地元の人々がより多くのお金を稼ぐことができます。

さらに、観光地を建設することで、地元の人々に雇用の機会が生まれます。観光地を運営するためには、より多くの労働力が必要になります。これにより、地元の人口が増加し、地域にさらなる利益がもたらされます。

結論として、地方自治体が観光地を建設することは良いアイデアだと私は考えています。

 

Q:⑭Do you think that small business can survive in Japan’s current economy?

自分の答え↓

A: I do not think that small business can survive in Japan’s current economy for two reasons.
To begin with, big business have more reliable than small business. For example, big construction companies have been increasing many jobs, on the other hand, small companies have been declining, because big companies have stronger warranty than small companies. So customers will choose more big companies than small companies.
Another reason is that, big companies can hire many more employees than small companies. It can lead to increased many ideas and creativity, benefiting company they work for. When big business compete with small business, big business will win in the future.
In conclusion, I believe that, in Japan’s current economy situation, small business cannot survive.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

I don’t think small businesses can survive in Japan’s current economy for two reasons.

Firstly, big businesses are more reliable than small businesses. For instance, large construction companies have been creating more job opportunities, while small companies have been declining. This is because big companies offer stronger warranties than small companies, making customers prefer them over small businesses.

Secondly, big companies can hire a significantly larger number of employees compared to small companies. This results in increased ideas and creativity, which benefits the companies they work for. When big businesses compete with small businesses, it is likely that the big businesses will prevail in the long run.

In conclusion, given Japan’s current economic situation, I believe that small businesses cannot survive.

現在の日本の経済状況では、私は小規模企業が生き残ることはできないと考えています。その理由は2つあります。

まず第一に、大企業は小企業よりも信頼性が高いです。例えば、大型建設会社は多くの仕事を増やしていますが、一方で小企業は減少しています。これは大企業が小企業よりも強力な保証を提供しているためであり、顧客は大企業を選ぶ傾向にあります。

第二に、大企業は小企業と比べてはるかに多くの従業員を雇うことができます。これにより、アイデアや創造性が増加し、それが彼らが働く企業に利益をもたらします。大企業と小企業が競合する場合、長期的には大企業が勝つ可能性が高いです。

結論として、現在の日本の経済状況では、小規模企業は生き残ることができないと考えています。

⑭Q Agree or disagree: Children should start studying subjects when they’re only a few years old.

自分の答え↓

A: I agree that Children should start studying subjects when they’re only a few years old because there are some beneficial for children.
To begin with, children absorb things very fast, so it is good way to learn things for children. For example, English is advantageous when children learn it very young age, especially in term of pronunciation tend to good. And these are helpful for brain development.
In addition, children can acquire social skills by learning with other children. This allows to make friends, argue. through these experience, they are very helpful even after they enter the school or work. It is important for children to provide good educational environment.
In conclusion, I believe that Children should start studying subjects when they’re very young age.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

I agree that children should start studying subjects at a young age because it benefits them.
Firstly, children have a fast learning ability, making it a good time for them to acquire knowledge. For instance, learning English at a young age is advantageous, especially for pronunciation skills, which tend to develop well.  Moreover, studying with other children enables them to develop social skills, make friends, and engage in discussions. These experiences are beneficial even as they progress into school and work. Providing a good educational environment is crucial for children.
In conclusion, I believe that children should begin studying subjects at a very young age.

幼い子供たちは、数年のうちに科目を学び始めるべきだという点に同意します。なぜなら、子供たちは物事を非常に速く吸収する能力を持っているため、学ぶのに最適な時期だからです。例えば、英語を幼い頃に学ぶことは有利であり、特に発音の面で良くなりやすいです。また、他の子供たちと一緒に学ぶことで社交スキルを身につけることができます。友達を作ったり、議論したりすることができます。これらの経験は、学校や仕事に進んだ後でも役立ちます。子供たちには良い教育環境を提供することが重要です。結論として、私は幼い子供たちはできるだけ早い時期から科目を学び始めるべきだと考えています。

2020年度第2回
Q Agree or disagree: more needs to be done to improve public safety

自分の答え↓

A: I agree that more needs to be done to improve public safety by each countries for two reasons.
To begin with, there are many crimes where countries, so they should strengthen in term of safety. For example, increasing monitors things lead to solve the problems because monitors things are prove, if crime happen. And it is good way to protect for residents.
Another reason is that, in recent years, developing of technology is graetful. This is very useful for people. But it often uses crime, so country’s politician should restrict in term of them and use safety for people. they are beneficial to country and residents.
In conclusion, I believe that countries should be done to improve public safety.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

I agree that more needs to be done to improve public safety in each country for two reasons.

Firstly, there is a high incidence of crime in many countries, so they should strengthen their safety measures. For example, increasing the use of surveillance cameras can help solve crimes by providing evidence when incidents occur, making it a good way to protect residents.

Secondly, the recent advancements in technology have been remarkable and beneficial for people. However, technology is often misused for criminal purposes. Therefore, politicians in each country should impose restrictions on its use to ensure the safety of the people. These measures would be advantageous for both the country and its residents.

In conclusion, I believe that countries should take proactive steps to improve public safety.

同意します。各国で公共安全を向上させるためには、さらなる取り組みが必要です。

まず第一に、多くの国で犯罪が発生しているため、安全対策を強化する必要があります。例えば、監視カメラの増設は、犯罪が発生した場合に証拠を提供し、住民を保護する良い方法です。

第二に、最近の技術の進歩は人々にとって非常に有益ですが、犯罪目的で悪用されることも多いです。そのため、各国の政治家は技術の使用に制限を設け、人々の安全を確保すべきです。これらの措置は国と住民の両方にとって有益です。

結論として、私は各国が公共安全の向上に積極的な取り組みを行うべきだと考えています。

2020年度第3回
Q: Agree or disagree: More people should become vegetarians in the future.

自分の答え↓

A: I agree that More people should become vegetarians in the future for two reasons.
To begin with, nowadays, there are various foods in the world such as meat, fish, snacks and so on. They are include bad things for people’s health. However, vegetables are good for health, so more eating vegetables people should increase. As a result, it can lead to increase health people.
Another reason is that, increasing eating vegetables people is good for environments because it needs to grow more vegetables when it demand increase. Many vegetables farm are crucial for environments, and it can lead to clean air pollution. This is very beneficial to the world’s environments.
In conclusion, I believe that More people should become vegetarians in the future.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

I agree that more people should become vegetarians in the future for two reasons.

To begin with, there are various foods in the world today, such as meat, fish, and snacks, that can be detrimental to people’s health. However, vegetables are good for health, so more people should increase their vegetable consumption. As a result, it can lead to improved overall health.

Another reason is that an increase in the number of people eating vegetables is beneficial for the environment. As the demand for vegetables increases, more farms dedicated to growing vegetables will be needed. Many vegetable farms play a crucial role in maintaining a clean environment and can help reduce air pollution. This is highly advantageous for the world’s ecosystems.

In conclusion, I believe that more people should become vegetarians in the future.

将来、もっと多くの人々がベジタリアンになるべきだと私は同意します。その理由は2つあります。

まず、現代では肉や魚、スナックなど、さまざまな食べ物が存在しますが、これらは人々の健康に悪影響を及ぼす可能性があります。しかし、野菜は健康に良いため、野菜をもっと摂る人々を増やすべきです。その結果、健康な人々の増加につながるでしょう。

もう一つの理由は、野菜を食べる人々の増加が環境にとって良いことです。需要の増加に伴い、野菜の栽培が増える必要があります。多くの野菜農場は環境保全に重要な役割を果たし、大気汚染の軽減にも寄与することができます。これは世界の環境にとって非常に有益です。

結論として、将来、もっと多くの人々がベジタリアンになるべきだと私は考えています。

 

⑮Q: Do you think it’s good for kids to be given their own rooms?

自分の答え↓

A: I do not think that it’s good for kids to be given their own rooms for two reasons.
To begin with, having kid own rooms is costly because it needs to have some rooms in house, so it cannot avoid to lent high costly house, and all families cannot afford to give their children own rooms. these are not economy to families.
Another reason is that, children have their own room means it can lead to decline to spend time with their parent. It is important for children to spend time with their parent, especially when they are very young age. Therefore, children should build good relationships with their parent.
In conclusion, I do not think that it’s good for kids to be given their own rooms.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

I do not think it is good for kids to have their own rooms for two reasons.

Firstly, giving kids their own rooms can be costly because it requires a larger house, which may not be affordable for all families. This can put a strain on their finances.

Secondly, having their own room may result in reduced time spent with their parents. It is important for children, especially at a young age, to spend quality time with their parents and build strong relationships.

Therefore, I believe it is not beneficial for kids to have their own rooms.

子供たちに独自の部屋を与えることは、2つの理由から良いとは思いません。

まず第一に、子供たちに独自の部屋を与えることは高額な費用がかかります。それには家の中に余分な部屋が必要であり、高額な家賃を支払わなければならないため、全ての家族が自分の子供に独自の部屋を与えることができるわけではありません。これは家族にとって経済的な負担となります。

もう一つの理由は、子供たちが独自の部屋を持つことは、親との時間の減少につながる可能性があります。特に幼い子供たちは、親との時間を過ごすことが重要です。したがって、子供たちは親との良好な関係を築くことが重要です。

結論として、私は子供たちに独自の部屋を与えることは良くないと考えています。

 

⑯Q: Do you think that raising consumption taxes in Japan is necessary in today’s society?

自分の答え↓

A: I do not think that raising consumption taxes in Japan is necessary in today’s society for two reasons.
To begin with, cost of living is already high, such as foods and lent of apartment. It is not increasing our income today, if raising consumption taxes will keep going up, people’s living will suffer and they cannot save the money for their future.
In addition, nowadays, is has been increasing elderly people and it will increase retirement people. Raising consumption means they cannot live daily life because they cannot earn money after retirement, so Japan should decrease consumption taxes for them. This, in turn, they can live safety.
In conclusion, I believe it is not necessary to raise consumption taxes in Japan in today’s society.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

I do not think that raising consumption taxes in Japan is necessary in today’s society for two reasons.
To begin with, the cost of living is already high, such as food and rent for apartments. If consumption taxes continue to increase, people’s standard of living will suffer, and they will struggle to save money for their future.   Additionally, the population of elderly people is increasing, and this trend will continue with more people entering retirement. Raising consumption taxes would make it difficult for them to sustain their daily lives, as they cannot earn money after retirement. Therefore, Japan should consider reducing consumption taxes for this demographic so that they can live safely.
In conclusion, I believe it is unnecessary to raise consumption taxes in Japan in today’s society.

現代の日本において、消費税の引き上げは必要ではないと考えます。その理由は2つあります。
まず第一に、生活費が既に高く、食品やアパートの家賃などが上昇しています。もし消費税がますます増えるのであれば、人々の生活水準は悪化し、将来のための貯金ができなくなるでしょう。
さらに、高齢者の人口が増加しており、これからも引退する人々が増えていく傾向にあります。消費税を引き上げることは、彼らが日常生活を維持するのが困難になるでしょう。なぜなら、彼らは退職後に収入を得ることができないからです。そのため、日本はこの人口に対して消費税を減らすことを考慮すべきです。
結論として、現代の日本においては消費税の引き上げは必要ないと考えています。

 

⑰Q Agree or disagree: Japanese people eat less healthy food than used to.

自分の答え↓

A: I disagree that Japanese people eat less healthy food than used to for two reasons.
To begin with, the number of Japanese people who are aware in term of health foods is increasing nowadays, so there are various foods in Japan, Japanese people chose healthy food. Therefore, they can keep their health.
Another reason is that, these days, we can buy healthy food and supplement affordable price. It is advantageous to chose them because they are not costly, and in the future, more and more people who consider their health will increase because we can easily get to healthy food.
In conclusion, more and more people will eat healthy food in the future.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

I disagree that Japanese people eat less healthy food than they used to for two reasons.

To begin with, the number of Japanese people who are becoming aware of healthy foods is increasing nowadays, so there are various healthy food options available in Japan. Japanese people are choosing healthier food, which enables them to maintain their health.

Another reason is that nowadays we can buy healthy food and supplements at affordable prices. It is advantageous to choose them because they are not costly, and in the future, more and more people who prioritize their health will increase because we can easily access healthy food.

In conclusion, more and more people will be eating healthy food in the future.

私は、日本人が過去よりも健康的な食事を摂っていないという意見には異論を唱えます。その理由は2つあります。

まず第一に、健康食品に対する意識が日本の人々の間で増えており、現在ではさまざまな健康食品が日本で利用可能です。日本人は健康的な食品を選ぶことができ、それによって健康を維持することができます。

もう一つの理由は、現在では手頃な価格で健康食品やサプリメントを購入することができます。それらを選ぶことは有利であり、将来的には健康を重視する人々が増えるでしょう。なぜなら、健康食品に簡単にアクセスすることができるからです。

結論として、将来においてますます多くの人々が健康的な食事を摂るようになるでしょう。

 

⑱Q: Do you think that electronic books will become more popular than paper books in the near future?

自分の答え↓

A: I think that electronic books will become more popular than paper books in the near future for two reasons.
To begin with, one of the advantageous of electronic books is that you can read anywhere and anytime. It can allow, you download on your smartphone or tablet. Moreover, you do not need to carry books, so electronic books are more convenient than paper books.
Additionally, in term of cost, electronic books are more advantageous than paper books because electronic books do not need to use paper and to go book store. You can buy it easily on the internet. It is very useful. Also, electronic books do not require paper, as a result, this is eco-friendly.
In conclusion, I believe more and more people will read electronic books than paper books in the near future.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

I think that electronic books will become more popular than paper books in the near future for two reasons.

To begin with, one of the advantages of electronic books is that you can read them anywhere and anytime. You can download them on your smartphone or tablet. Moreover, you do not need to carry physical books, so electronic books are more convenient than paper books.

Additionally, in terms of cost, electronic books are more advantageous than paper books because they don’t require paper or a trip to the bookstore. You can easily purchase them on the internet, which is very convenient. Furthermore, electronic books are eco-friendly since they don’t require paper.

In conclusion, I believe that more and more people will prefer reading electronic books over paper books in the near future.

近い将来、電子書籍が紙の書籍よりも人気になると考えています。その理由は2つあります。

まず第一に、電子書籍の利点の一つは、いつでもどこでも読むことができるということです。スマートフォンやタブレットにダウンロードすることができます。さらに、本を持ち運ぶ必要がないため、電子書籍の方が紙の書籍よりも便利です。

また、コストの面では、電子書籍の方が紙の書籍よりも有利です。なぜなら、電子書籍には紙が必要なく、書店に行く必要もありません。インターネットで簡単に購入することができます。さらに、電子書籍は紙を必要としないため、環境に優しいです。

結論として、私は将来、ますます多くの人々が紙の書籍よりも電子書籍を好むと考えています。

 

合格力チェックテスト
Q: Should gifted students be allowed to skip a grade in Japan?

自分の答え↓

A: I do not think that gifted students should be allowed to skip a grade in Japan for two reasons.
To begin with, spending time with same generation is important for students because making friends with same generation can lead to grow to their mental. If students have relationships with older people than them, it is difficult to make friends and they do not live comfortable.
Additionally, studying with same generation can maintain their motivation because it is enjoyable to study. If students skip a grade, they have a lot of studying things, and then their motivation will decrease gradually. As a result, they may do not have motivation.
In conclusion, I believe that gifted students should study with same generation.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

I do not think that gifted students should be allowed to skip a grade in Japan for two reasons.

Firstly, spending time with their peers is important for students because making friends with their peers can contribute to their mental growth. If students have relationships with older individuals, it becomes difficult for them to make friends and they may not feel comfortable in their social interactions.

Secondly, studying with their peers can help maintain their motivation as it becomes enjoyable to study together. If students skip a grade, they will have a lot of additional academic responsibilities, which may gradually decrease their motivation. Consequently, they may lose their drive to learn.

In conclusion, I believe that gifted students should study alongside their peers.

日本では、優れた能力を持つ生徒が1学年を飛び級することを許可すべきではないと思います。その理由は2つあります。まず第一に、同世代の生徒との時間を過ごすことは重要です。同世代の友達を作ることは、彼らの精神的な成長に寄与するからです。もし生徒が年上の人々との関係を持っていると、友達を作ることが難しくなり、社交的な交流において快適さを感じないかもしれません。

第二に、同世代の生徒と一緒に勉強することは、やる気を維持するのに役立ちます。一緒に勉強することが楽しくなるからです。もし生徒が1学年を飛び級すると、追加の学業責任が増え、その結果、徐々にやる気が低下する可能性があります。結果的に、学ぶ意欲を失うかもしれません。

結論として、私は優れた能力を持つ生徒は同世代の生徒と一緒に学ぶべきだと考えています。

 

21年度 第1回

I agree that big companies have a positive effect on society because they contribute to the society in term of the environment and work-life balance.
To begin with, employees who work at big companies do not be overwork because big companies can better control about employees’ worktime. However, it is difficult for small or middle companies because their priority is profit, so that employees have to do overwork, as a result, it is hardly between work and life balance.
Secondly, big companies more contribute to the environment than small or middle companies. For example, big companies try to recycle such as industrial garbage, living garbage, and so on. But it is difficult for other companies because it very costly to prepare facility that recycling garbage.
In conclusion, I think big companies contribute on society.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

I agree that big companies have a positive effect on society because they contribute to society in terms of the environment and work-life balance.

To begin with, employees who work at big companies do not need to overwork because big companies can better control employees’ work time. However, it is difficult for small or middle-sized companies because their priority is profit, so employees have to work overtime. As a result, it is hard to maintain a balance between work and life.

Secondly, big companies contribute more to the environment than small or middle-sized companies. For example, big companies make an effort to recycle industrial waste, household waste, and so on. But it is challenging for other companies because it is very costly to prepare facilities for recycling waste.

In conclusion, I think big companies contribute to society.

私は、大きな企業が社会にポジティブな影響を与えていると考えています。なぜなら、彼らは環境と仕事とのバランスに貢献しているからです。

まず第一に、大企業で働く従業員は過労になる必要がありません。なぜなら、大企業は従業員の労働時間をより適切にコントロールできるからです。一方、小規模な企業や中堅企業では、利益が優先されるため、従業員は過重労働を強いられることがあります。その結果、仕事と生活のバランスを保つのが難しくなります。

次に、大企業は小規模な企業や中堅企業よりも環境に対する貢献が大きいです。例えば、大企業は産業廃棄物や生活ごみなどのリサイクルに取り組んでいます。一方、他の企業にとっては、ゴミのリサイクル施設を整備することが非常に高コストであるため、難しい課題となっています。

まとめると、私は大企業が社会に貢献していると考えています。

 

21年度 第2回

In my opinion, it is beneficial for workers to change jobs often in term of working conditions and career goals.
To begin with, by changing jobs, workers can find appropriate work place environment for themselves. If they continue to work at inappropriate work place, they will lose their motivation, and it is not profitable for both themselves and companies. So it is important for workers to work appropriate work place.
For another reason is that it is crucial for workers to experience various jobs. By experiencing many jobs, they can obtain skills that they need,  and then these skills will be helpful when they work where they want in the future.
In conclusion, I believe that by changing jobs often is beneficial for workers.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

In my opinion, it is beneficial for workers to change jobs often in terms of working conditions and career goals.

To begin with, by changing jobs, workers can find a more suitable work environment for themselves. If they continue to work in an unsuitable workplace, they will lose their motivation, and it will not be beneficial for either themselves or their companies. Therefore, it is important for workers to find an appropriate work environment.

Another reason is that it is crucial for workers to experience various jobs. By trying out different roles, they can acquire the skills they need. These skills will be valuable when they eventually work in their desired positions in the future.

In conclusion, I believe that changing jobs frequently can be beneficial for workers.

私の意見では、労働条件とキャリア目標の観点から、働く人々が頻繁に転職することは有益です。

まず第一に、転職することで、労働者は自分に適した職場環境を見つけることができます。不適切な職場で働き続けると、モチベーションを失い、それは自身と企業の両方にとって有益ではありません。したがって、労働者にとって適切な職場を見つけることは重要です。

もう一つの理由は、さまざまな仕事を経験することが労働者にとって重要であることです。さまざまな仕事を経験することで、必要なスキルを身につけることができます。これらのスキルは、将来自分が望むポジションで働く際に役立つでしょう。

まとめると、私は頻繁に転職することが労働者にとって有益だと考えています。

平成30年度 第1回

In my opinion, it is acceptable to keep animals in zoos in term of educational and endangered species.
To begin with, it is very profitable for people to learn about animals. By keeping animals in zoos, they can learn animals ecosystem and it is more helpful for people that they want to work such as breeder, pet shop owner and so on.
Another reason is that it leads to protect animal’s species by controlling animals in zoos. Nowadays, the number of animal species are endangered, so various animal’s species should be protected in zoos for avoiding endangered, and it can help for the future.
In conclusion, I believe that keeping animals in zoos is acceptable for the future.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

In my opinion, it is acceptable to keep animals in zoos in terms of education and the preservation of endangered species.

To begin with, keeping animals in zoos can be highly beneficial for educating people about various species. Observing animals in a controlled environment allows people to learn about their ecosystems. Moreover, this knowledge can be particularly valuable for individuals pursuing careers such as animal breeders or pet shop owners.

Another reason is that zoos play a role in protecting endangered animal species. In the present day, numerous animal species are facing the threat of extinction. To prevent further endangerment, zoos can serve as safe havens for various species, contributing to their preservation and potentially aiding their recovery in the future.

In conclusion, I believe that keeping animals in zoos is justifiable for educational purposes and the conservation of endangered species.

私の意見では、教育と絶滅危惧種の保存の観点から動物を動物園で飼育することは許容されると思います。

まず第一に、動物園で動物を飼育することは、人々にさまざまな種について学ぶ上で非常に有益です。管理された環境で動物を観察することで、その生態系について学ぶことができます。さらに、この知識は、動物のブリーダーやペットショップオーナーなどの職業を追求する個人にとって特に価値のあるものとなるでしょう。

もう一つの理由は、動物園が絶滅の危機に瀕した動物種の保護に役立つことです。現代において、多くの動物種が絶滅の脅威にさらされています。絶滅を防ぐために、動物園はさまざまな種にとって安全な避難所となり、これらの種の保存に寄与し、将来的には回復を助ける可能性があります。

まとめると、私は動物園で動物を飼育することは教育の目的や絶滅危惧種の保護のために妥当であると考えています。

平成30年度 第2回

In my opinion, Japan should do more to protect its historic sites in term of education and tourism.

To begin with, protecting historic sites is beneficial for education. For example, we can learn about war’s sadly at after war historic sites, and we can remind to never do war again. It is important for everyone living in Japan.

secondly, it is good for tourism because there are great view place and various shops in historic sites. Protecting historic sites, it means that environmental of tourism is prepared so that it is advanced for economy. Also earning money at historic sites, they are preserved to use this money.

In conclusion, I believe that Japan should protect historic sites for education, tourism and in the future.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

In my opinion, Japan should do more to protect its historic sites in terms of education and tourism.

To begin with, protecting historic sites is beneficial for education. For example, we can learn about the sorrows of war at historical sites from the past, and we can be reminded to never engage in war again. This is important for everyone living in Japan.

Secondly, it is good for tourism because historic sites often offer breathtaking views and a variety of shops. Protecting these historic sites means that the tourism infrastructure is in place, which can advance the economy. Additionally, the revenue generated at these historic sites can be reinvested in their preservation.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that Japan should protect its historic sites for the sake of education, tourism, and the future.

私の意見では、教育と観光の観点から、日本は歴史的な場所を保護するためにさらに努力すべきだと考えています。

まず第一に、歴史的な場所の保護は教育にとって有益です。例えば、戦後の歴史的な場所で戦争の悲劇について学び、二度と戦争を起こさないように気を引き締めることができます。これは日本に住むすべての人々にとって重要です。

第二に、観光にも好影響をもたらします。歴史的な場所には素晴らしい景色やさまざまな店があることが多いです。歴史的な場所を保護することは観光インフラの整備を意味し、経済の発展に寄与します。さらに、これらの歴史的な場所で得られる収益は、その保護に再投資されることがあります。

まとめると、私は日本が教育、観光、そして将来のために歴史的な場所を保護すべきだと強く信じています。

21年度 第2回

In my opinion, it is beneficial for workers to change jobs often in term of career goals and working conditions.
To begin with, experiencing various jobs is important for workers because it is useful for finding job what you really want to be. If only one job working, you do not know what your suitable job, nut by changing job, eventually you will find job what you want to be.
Secondly, working place is not always good working conditions. If you keep to work bad conditions, you may be mental sick or lose motivation. So that changing job is good for workers to find their suitable job.
In conclusion, I believe that changing jobs often is beneficial for workers. So for these reasons, they should change job often.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

In my opinion, it is beneficial for workers to change jobs often in terms of career goals and working conditions.

To begin with, experiencing various jobs is important for workers because it is useful for finding the job that you truly want to pursue. If you only stick to one job, you won’t know what job suits you best, but by changing jobs, you will eventually discover the job that aligns with your aspirations.

Secondly, the working environment is not always ideal in terms of working conditions. If you continue to work in unfavorable conditions, you may experience mental health issues or lose motivation. Therefore, changing jobs can be advantageous for workers in finding a more suitable work environment.

In conclusion, I believe that changing jobs often can be beneficial for workers. For these reasons, they should consider changing jobs periodically.

私の意見では、仕事を頻繁に変えることは、キャリアの目標や労働条件の観点から、労働者にとって有益です。

まず第一に、さまざまな仕事を経験することは、労働者にとって重要です。なぜなら、本当に追求したい職業を見つけるのに役立つからです。一つの仕事にこだわってしまうと、自分に本当に合った仕事が何か分からなくなりますが、仕事を変えることで、最終的には自分が本当に追求したい職業を見つけることができます。

第二に、労働条件は常に理想的とは限りません。不利な条件で働き続けると、精神的な健康問題を抱えるか、モチベーションを失う可能性があります。したがって、仕事を変えることは、労働者にとってより適した労働環境を見つけるのに有利です。

まとめると、私は仕事を頻繁に変えることが労働者にとって有益であると考えています。これらの理由から、彼らは定期的に仕事を変えることを検討すべきです。

2020年度 第1回

In my opinion, it is a good idea for local government to build tourist sites, such as them park and museums in term of effect on local people and spending by visitors.
To begin with, building tourist sites is beneficial for local government because it will create employment and is good for local people. Also, by activating city or village, people consider to move there and then it will increase population.
Second, visitors spend money such as restaurant or souvenir at tourist sites. It leads to more develop local government. Also, increasing foreign tourists, it generates to interact a lot both local people and foreign tourists each other. This is good opportunity to know such as culture and Japan’s good things.
In conclusion, I believe that building tourist sites can be good idea for local government.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

In my opinion, it is a good idea for local governments to build tourist sites, such as theme parks and museums, in terms of their impact on local communities and the spending by visitors.

To begin with, constructing tourist sites is beneficial for local governments as it creates employment opportunities and improves the lives of local residents. Additionally, by revitalizing cities or villages, more people may consider relocating there, ultimately leading to an increase in the local population.

Secondly, visitors spend money on things like restaurants and souvenirs at tourist sites. This contributes to the further development of local governments. Moreover, an increase in foreign tourists fosters greater interaction between local residents and foreign visitors, providing an excellent opportunity to learn about different cultures and the positive aspects of Japan.

In conclusion, I believe that building tourist sites can be a good idea for local governments.

私の意見では、地方自治体が観光スポット、例えばテーマパークや博物館などを建設するのは、地域社会への影響や訪問者による支出に対して良いアイデアだと考えています。

まず第一に、観光スポットを建設することは、雇用の創出や地元住民の生活向上に寄与します。また、都市や村の活性化を促すことで、より多くの人々がその地域への移住を検討するかもしれず、結果として地元の人口が増加する可能性があります。

第二に、訪問者は観光スポットでレストランやお土産品などにお金を支出します。これは地方自治体のさらなる発展に寄与します。さらに、外国からの観光客の増加は、地元住民と外国の訪問者との相互作用を促進し、異なる文化や日本の良い側面について学ぶ絶好の機会となります。

結論として、私は観光スポットを建設することが地方自治体にとって良いアイデアであると考えています。

平成29年度 第1回

I agree that Japan should become a completely cashless society in term of crime and effect on businesses.
To begin with, one of the advantage of cashless is that it is very useful and safety to buy something for consumers. People do not have to carry any money, instead, they can pay with credit cards or smartphone’s app and so on. This is helpful for them. If stealing their credit cards, they immediately call each companies, and then stop using credit cards.
Second, by becoming cashless society, people who buy something and take a service will increase because paying with credit cards or smartphone’s app is much easier than cash. If in that case, paying cash, if you do not have enough money to buy you want, you need to give up to buy it but credit cards do not worry about it.
In conclusion, I believe that becoming a completely cashless society is a good effect for Japan.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

I agree that Japan should transition to a completely cashless society in terms of reducing crime and benefiting businesses.

To begin with, one of the advantages of going cashless is the convenience and safety it offers to consumers. People no longer need to carry physical currency; instead, they can make payments using credit cards, smartphone apps, and other digital methods. This provides them with a sense of security. If their credit cards are stolen, they can immediately contact the respective companies to block the cards.

Secondly, transitioning to a cashless society will likely increase the number of people using services and making purchases. Paying with credit cards or smartphone apps is much more straightforward than dealing with cash. In cases where individuals might not have enough physical money to buy what they want, digital payment methods allow them to proceed without worry.

In conclusion, I believe that transitioning to a completely cashless society would have positive effects on Japan, including reducing crime and benefiting businesses.

私は、犯罪の減少やビジネスの利益に関連して、日本が完全なキャッシュレス社会に移行すべきだと考えています。

まず第一に、キャッシュレスに移行する利点の一つは、消費者にとっての便益と安全性です。人々はもはや実際の現金を持ち歩く必要がありません。代わりに、クレジットカード、スマートフォンアプリなどのデジタル手段を使って支払いができます。これは彼らにとって非常に便利です。クレジットカードが盗まれた場合、直ちに各カード会社に連絡し、カードの使用を停止できます。

第二に、完全なキャッシュレス社会への移行により、サービスの利用と購入を行う人々の数が増加する可能性があります。クレジットカードやスマートフォンアプリを使って支払う方が、現金を使うよりもはるかに簡単です。物理的なお金が足りない場合、デジタル支払い方法を使えば心配する必要がありません。

まとめると、完全なキャッシュレス社会への移行は、犯罪の減少やビジネスの利益に対して日本に良い影響を与えると私は考えています。

2020年度第2回

I agree that more needs to be done to improve public safety in term of crime and accidents.
To begin with, by increasing surveillance cameras in cities can be reduced crimes. People will do not think to do crime because they already know that there are a lot of surveillance cameras in cities. If crimes are happened, these cameras are evidences so that it is helpful to solve problems.
Another reason is that thanks to improvement technology, our lives is useful. By improving public transportation, it is useful for people to go to anywhere, but on the other hand, it is fact that accident is increasing. So we need to tackle this issues, such as by arrangement public facilities.
In conclusion, I believe that government should be done to improve public safety.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

I agree that more needs to be done to improve public safety in terms of reducing crime and accidents.

To begin with, increasing the number of surveillance cameras in cities can help reduce crime. People may think twice about committing crimes if they are aware of the presence of numerous surveillance cameras in urban areas. In the event that crimes do occur, these cameras can provide valuable evidence to aid in solving cases.

Another reason is that thanks to advancements in technology, our lives have become more convenient. However, as we improve public transportation and make it more accessible, we must also address the fact that accidents are on the rise. Therefore, measures such as the arrangement of public facilities need to be taken to tackle these issues.

In conclusion, I believe that the government should take action to improve public safety.

私は、犯罪の減少と事故の防止に関して、公共の安全を向上させるためにさらなる取り組みが必要だと考えています。

まず第一に、都市に設置される監視カメラの数を増やすことは、犯罪を減少させるのに役立ちます。都市に多数の監視カメラが存在することを知っている人々は、犯罪を犯すことを躊躇するかもしれません。犯罪が発生した場合、これらのカメラは事件解決に役立つ証拠を提供することができます。

もう一つの理由は、技術の進歩により、私たちの生活が便利になったことです。しかし、公共交通機関を改善し、アクセスしやすくする一方で、事故が増加している現実もあります。したがって、公共施設の整備など、これらの問題に取り組むための対策を講じる必要があります。

まとめると、政府は公共の安全を向上させるために行動を起こすべきだと考えています。

2020年度 第3回

I agree that more people should become vegetarians in the future in term of health and environment.
To begin with, these days, there are various kind of food in the world. This includes bad foods for people’s health. If increasing vegetarians, people’s health will be better than before, and they will long live. Eating vegetables have only good beneficial for people.
Another reason is that increasing vegetarians is to more demand vegetables. This means that we need to grow more vegetables, and this leads to improve earth environment because allowing to more grow botany is good eco-friendly. therefore, environmental problems will solve in the future.
In conclusion, I believe that more people should become vegetarians in the future.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

I agree that more people should become vegetarians in the future in terms of health and the environment.

To begin with, in today’s world, there is a wide variety of food available, including foods that are not good for people’s health. If more people adopt a vegetarian diet, their health is likely to improve, leading to longer and healthier lives. Consuming vegetables has only positive benefits for people.

Another reason is that an increase in the number of vegetarians will create greater demand for vegetables. This, in turn, will necessitate the cultivation of more vegetables, leading to improvements in the Earth’s environment. Allowing for the growth of more plants is environmentally friendly, and as a result, it can help address environmental problems in the future.

In conclusion, I believe that more people should consider becoming vegetarians in the future.

私は、健康と環境の観点から、将来的にはもっと多くの人がベジタリアンになるべきだと考えています。

まず第一に、現代の世界ではさまざまな種類の食品が存在しますが、その中には健康に良くない食品も含まれています。もっと多くの人がベジタリアンになれば、彼らの健康が以前よりも改善され、より長寿命で健康的な生活が送れるでしょう。野菜を摂取することは、人々にとってただの利益しかもたらしません。

もう一つの理由は、ベジタリアンの増加によって野菜への需要が増すことです。これは、もっと多くの野菜を育てる必要があることを意味し、地球の環境を改善する一助となります。植物の成長を促進することは環境に優しく、その結果、将来の環境問題に対処するのに役立つでしょう。

まとめると、将来的にはもっと多くの人々がベジタリアンになることを検討すべきだと私は考えています。

2022年度学力テスト

In my opinion, I do not think that gifted students should be allowed to skip a grade in Japan in term of mental growth and maturity issues.
To begin with, if gifted students be allowed to skip a grade, exactly they can more study things, but it is not good for their mental growth to take classes by surrounding older children. For example, gifted students may be targeted to bully by other children.
Second, all children should grow with the same generations in class because they cannot only acquire academic ability but obtain society interact and cooperative. These things are helpful for work when they will become working. However, these things may be difficult by spending time with the other generations.
In conclusion, I believe that gifted students should spend time with the same generations.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

In my opinion, I do not think that gifted students should be allowed to skip a grade in Japan in terms of their mental growth and maturity issues.

To begin with, while allowing gifted students to skip a grade may enable them to study more advanced material, it may not be beneficial for their mental growth to be in classes with older children. For instance, gifted students might become targets for bullying by their older peers.

Secondly, it is important for all children to grow up alongside their peers in the same grade because this not only helps them acquire academic skills but also fosters social interaction and cooperation, which are valuable skills for their future careers. However, spending time with older or younger generations may hinder the development of these skills.

In conclusion, I believe that gifted students should spend their educational years with students of the same age group.

私の意見では、賢い生徒が学年をスキップすることを日本で許可すべきではないと考えています。その理由は、彼らの精神的成長や成熟に関連する問題です。

まず第一に、賢い生徒が学年をスキップすることで、より高度な学習をすることができるかもしれませんが、年齢の異なる子供たちと同じクラスにいることは、彼らの精神的成長にとって有益ではないかもしれません。例えば、賢い生徒は他の子供たちからいじめの対象になる可能性があります。

第二に、すべての子供たちは同じ学年の仲間と共に成長することが大切です。これにより、彼らは学術的なスキルを身につけるだけでなく、社会との相互作用や協力のスキルも養うことができます。これらのスキルは将来のキャリアにとって非常に有用です。しかし、異なる学年の仲間と時間を過ごすことで、これらのスキルの発展が妨げられるかもしれません。

まとめると、私は賢い生徒も同じ学年の生徒と共に学ぶべきだと考えています。

平成29年度 第2回

I agree that the Japanese government should do more to protect the environment in terms of pollution and natural resources issues.
To begin with, thanks to advance in technology, our lives are very useful. On the other hand, earth’s environment is getting worse. For example, as increasing the number of people who use the car, there are a lot of CO-2 emission, as a result, it leads to get global warming. So Japanese government should restrict low in order to reduce CO-2.
Second, natural resources are limited in our world. If we continue to use natural resources, these resources will empty. So Japanese government should protect these things, and search alternative resources, such as electric of the wind power and electric of water power.
In conclusion, I believe that the environment should be protected by Japanese government.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

I agree that the Japanese government should do more to protect the environment in terms of pollution and natural resource issues.

To begin with, thanks to advances in technology, our lives have become very convenient. However, the Earth’s environment is deteriorating. For instance, as the number of people using cars increases, there is a significant rise in CO2 emissions, resulting in global warming. Therefore, the Japanese government should implement stricter regulations to reduce CO2 emissions.

Secondly, natural resources are limited on our planet. If we continue to deplete these resources, they will eventually run out. Therefore, the Japanese government should not only protect these resources but also seek alternative sources, such as wind and hydroelectric power.

In conclusion, I believe that the Japanese government should take action to protect the environment.

私は、公害と自然資源の問題を考えると、日本政府は環境保護のためにもっと積極的な行動を取るべきだと同意しています。

まず第一に、技術の進歩により、私たちの生活は非常に便利になりました。一方で、地球環境は悪化しています。例えば、自動車の利用者が増えることで、大量のCO2排出が発生し、結果として地球温暖化につながっています。したがって、日本政府はCO2削減のために厳格な規制を導入すべきです。

第二に、地球上の自然資源は限られています。これらの資源を使い続けると、いずれ枯渇してしまいます。したがって、日本政府はこれらの資源を保護するだけでなく、風力や水力などの代替エネルギー源を探し求めるべきです。

まとめると、私は日本政府が環境保護に取り組むべきだと考えています。

教育・育児 1 

In my opinion, I think that online courses are as effective as traditional calsses because it is beneficial in terms of flexibility and cost.
To begin with, one of the advantage of online courses is flexibility. It is helpful for people especially who want to study while working. It is difficult for them to secure time to study by studying to commute to traditional class. However, they can easier take classes by online courses.
Second, typically, traditional classes are high cost, but online courses are not. So it is advantageous for cost. If young people such as students do not have enough money, they can take easily online courses because online courses is not expensive. Online courses may solve the problems for poor people.
In conclusion, I believe that online courses can be effective for people as well as traditional classes.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

In my opinion, I believe that online courses are just as effective as traditional classes because they offer significant benefits in terms of flexibility and cost.

To begin with, one of the advantages of online courses is their flexibility. This is particularly helpful for individuals who wish to study while working. Commuting to traditional classes can be time-consuming, making it difficult for them to find the time to study. However, online courses allow for greater flexibility in scheduling, making it easier for them to attend classes.

Secondly, traditional classes are typically more expensive, whereas online courses are more cost-effective. This cost advantage is especially beneficial for young people, such as students, who may have limited financial resources. Online courses are generally more affordable and accessible, which can help address the educational needs of individuals with financial constraints.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that online courses can be just as effective for individuals as traditional classes, offering the added advantages of flexibility and cost savings.

私の意見では、オンライン講座は柔軟性とコストの面で利点があるため、従来のクラスと同じくらい効果的だと考えています。

まず第一に、オンライン講座の利点の一つは柔軟性です。特に仕事をしながら勉強したい人々にとって役立ちます。通勤して従来のクラスに通うことは時間がかかるため、勉強の時間を確保することが難しいことがあります。しかし、オンライン講座ではスケジュールが柔軟であり、授業を受けることが容易です。

第二に、通常、従来のクラスは高額ですが、オンライン講座はコスト効果が高いです。このコストの利点は、学生などの若い人々にとって特に有益です。オンライン講座は一般的に費用が抑えられており、財政的に制約のある人々の教育ニーズに対応するのに役立ちます。

まとめると、私はオンライン講座は従来のクラスと同じくらい効果的であり、柔軟性とコストの割引という追加の利点を提供していると強く信じています。

平成29年度 第3回

In my opinion, I do not think that humans will live on other planets someday in terms of technology and dangers.
To begin with, it is difficult for all humans to live on other planets without the earth. Although various countries innovate universe study, they did not find any other planet to allow for living, and it may seems that technology might not become to develop that people love in other planets.
Second, people cannot live longer without the earth environment. For example, people can go to universe with rocket, but they cannot keep them good health because universe environment is very harsh environment. Even astronauts, when they come back to earth, their body health are very weak.
In conclusion, I think humans will not live on the other planets someday.

「文法を直して」と入力↓

In my opinion, I do not believe that humans will inhabit other planets someday, considering the challenges posed by technology and potential dangers.

To begin with, it is a formidable task for humans to establish sustainable habitation on planets other than Earth. Despite various countries advancing their studies of the universe, we have not yet discovered a planet suitable for human habitation. It appears that technology may not progress to the extent necessary for comfortable living on other planets.

Secondly, humans rely on Earth’s unique environment for their well-being and longevity. While people can travel to space via rockets, maintaining good health in the harsh environment of the universe is extremely challenging. Even astronauts, upon returning to Earth, often experience weakened physical health.

In conclusion, I do not anticipate that humans will establish permanent settlements on other planets in the foreseeable future.

私の意見では、技術的な課題と潜在的な危険を考えると、人類が将来他の惑星に居住することは難しいと考えています。

まず第一に、地球以外の惑星で持続可能な居住を確立するのは非常に困難な課題です。さまざまな国が宇宙研究を進めていますが、人間が居住可能な惑星をまだ見つけていないという現実があります。他の惑星で快適な生活をするために必要な技術が進歩するかどうかは不明です。

第二に、人間は健康と長寿のために地球独自の環境に依存しています。人々はロケットで宇宙に旅行できるかもしれませんが、宇宙の過酷な環境で健康を維持することは非常に困難です。宇宙飛行士でさえ、地球に戻ってから体調が弱くなることがよくあります。

まとめると、私は予見可能な将来において、人類が他の惑星に永住地を確立することはないと考えています。

 

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